Cry and get dry….

There are days when I get really mad,

And times when I am really sad.

When all that there seems to do,

Is just cry until my face turns blue.

I try and lay down on my bed,

And think of things that make me happy instead.

Like Disneyland or the beach,

Like Christmas Day and baby cheeks.

But, sometimes I just have to give up,

and let the water fall out of the cup.

I let the hoses pour,

Let the sprinklers rain,

Until my nose looks like its red with a stain.

My eyes are puffy, my hairs a mess,

If a fireman saw me he’d say, “Code red! Distress!”

Then as soon as you could blink,

All the tears are down the sink.

I take a deep breath,

and feel a lot better.

“Gosh I don’t like rainy weather.”

But, once in awhile everybody has to cry,

You gotta squeeze all the water out before you get nice and dry.

4 Responses so far »

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    M$.RAMiREsZ said,

    hEy,

    Well i looo0000ooove ur poem, it kind of descibes me & how ive been all this week…well lately ive been a lil’down buz of ma momzs,but ur poem jst helped me out a lil’bit…but n e who—-^
    Well love it & i say yew should keep ur talent going mija bkuzs dats onr GOOOOD story.Bkuzs sometimes yew do need 2 cry & let it all out SO dat way yew NO longer keep it inside of u bkus ive klearned dat hurts u even more,& brings more sadness 2 yew,,,
    But thank U 4 THIS WONDERFUL POEM
    P.S I LOVE MA 6A6E ERIC & I WANNA THAK HIM 4 ALWAYZS BAING DUR THREW DA HARD TIMES,,,ALTHO I CRYED 4 HIM 2!!! =](I LOVE U BABY & UR MA WHOLE WORL & I NEVE WANNA LET GO MI AMOR.& I NEVE WIIIIILLLL.LOL.JK.LIVE IT GOOD.)TE AMO CHINGOS AMOR!! =] WELL LATAZ GURL….& LATAZ BABY!~~~

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    dreamer0507 said,

    Well the truth is you have to just let it out sometimes cause it’s pretty hard to keep everything inside and just suffer…soooo really nice poem, i liked it :) .

  3. 3

    brrrroooookkkeee said,

    to be honest that was the stupidest poem i have ever read, the things you used to rhym were really juvinile.. its a good poem for a grade 4 or so though

  4. 4

    Thanks for your honest comment Brooke. The poem actually is intended for young children, but you are entitled to your opinion. I’ll be sure to thank you in the forward of my next book ;) Take care.


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